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Sunday, May 9, 2010

Girlfriend's vs Mother's love (continue)

She may have sexy body curves,
but it could never match a mother's curve when carrying me;

She may have pretty eyes,
but it could never match a mother's eyes that watched me from any danger;

She can be a good listener towards my expression,
but couldn't match a mother who listens to my nagging and discontent;

She may smell good everyday i met her,
but it could never match a mother's smell who's working hard everyday to make her child live a better life;

She may have an adorable smile that'll make you melt,
but it can never match a thousand meaningful smile by a mother just to see her child grow up;

She may have smooth hands that shiver you when touched,
but it could never match a mother's hands that held you through thick and thin;

She may have nice pair of legs ,
but those can never match a mother's pair legs that walked 9 months carrying us;

She may have a lot of experiences throughout her life that make you feel for her when she shared them,
but in spite all that, a mother's experience should touch even deeper inside your heart;

She may broke down to tears just because she's happy to be with me,
but it could never matched the tears that falls just to see her child is achieving success in front of her eyes;

She may got the highest achievements academically,
but can never match a mother's masters in 'how to raise u child' subject;

Take note that u can still find another one when u broke up with her,
but u can never find anyone else that have given birth to you;

The things that aren't appreciated now are soon to be realized when it's gone, so, appreciate ur mother's sacrifices by loving her and try our best to make her happy while she's still alive...because neither life nor death can be predicted...know that a mother knows best...even though we couldn't accept it...thanks is the word wanted by her...know that she is happy to see her child achieve what they want...but she'll be more than happy if u could share the success with them...and never to forget their effort to make u what u are rite now...

sorry if there's mistakes somewhere in this non-rhythmic poem...i'm not a good poet though...
maybe that this also written from a guy's perspective...i know there can be more...but i couldn't think of them though...sorry again...and Happy Mother's Day...
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2 comments:

SAM Class Blog D said...

A beautiful poem that came from the bottom of your heart!!!! I was touched.

Afif IZa said...

than miss....

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